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Grey, Part Two

May. 30th, 2007 | 01:16 pm

So, I've been gone for a while.  Family issues, School finals, etc.  My reasons for neglecting livejournal are neither original nor entertaining.  But I do not return empty handed.  I present to you the first eight chapters of Grey, heavily revised.  This post renders all the previous chapter posts obsolete.  Thanks, you're all wonderful, kisses for everyone, but don't touch me.

Because of posting limits, this post is broken into two parts.

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Grey, Part One

May. 30th, 2007 | 01:14 pm

So, I've been gone for a while.  Family issues, School finals, etc.  My reasons for neglecting livejournal are neither original nor entertaining.  But I do not return empty handed.  I present to you the first eight chapters of Grey, heavily revised.  This post renders all the previous chapter posts obsolete.  Thanks, you're all wonderful, kisses for everyone, but don't touch me.

Because of posting limits, this post is broken into two parts.

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Chapter Seven

Apr. 21st, 2007 | 01:37 pm

I would love to have feedback from anyone whose got me friended on this piece, as it is my primary literary endeavor for now and the rest of this year.  Please be as thorough as you are willing; I'm aware that you all have busy, productive, satisfying lives to attend to.

It bothers me that this chapter isn't very long, so I may merge it with the previous chapter sometime in the future.  Before I continue into the next chapter, I will probably be going back and touching up the previous chapters. I use "touch up" as a euphemism here for the horrors I am prepared to inflict upon those innocent chapters. If only they would be perfect like I told them they should be, I wouldn't have to do this to them.  They brought it upon themselves!

Anyhow, It's possible that I might delete every post on this journal when I repost the re-re-re-revised versions of these chapters.  (Actually, that's not enough "Re"s.  The first chapter has been completely rewritten six times).

I'd also like to take this part of my HTML document to once again thank everyone for their constructive feedback, and to remind anyone that if they want me to reciprocate on one of their pieces, sending me a message on LJ, AIM, or E-mail is the Pro way to make it happen.  My friends page updates approximately every 3 seconds with some person posting some thing like "So Bob got a cat today and then I was laid off and Bill says he doesn't love me anymore and I'm just ANGRY ALL THE TIME.  Brb cutting wrists."

So it's kind of hard to notice the one in a hundred posts which say, "Hey I wrote these words and I wish someone would write some words about how good these words are."

Earlier Chapters for people who have a scrolling disability:

The First
The Second
The Third
The Fourth
The Fifth
The Sixth

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Chapter Six

Apr. 11th, 2007 | 01:12 pm

I would love to have feedback from anyone whose got me friended on this piece, as it is my primary literary endeavor for now and the rest of this year.  Please be as thorough as you are willing; I'm aware that you all have busy, productive, satisfying lives to attend to.

Things that you should probably know:

Grey is a name, so I may spell it however I like.

This is the sixth chapter of a novel in progress. I've written much more, but this is the part of it I would like you to consider, so there will be no satisfying conclusion.  Earlier chapters can be found here:

The First
The Second
The Third
The Fourth
The Fifth

I shamelessly copied and pasted this introduction from the first chapter.

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Chapter Five

Apr. 2nd, 2007 | 01:38 pm

I would love to have feedback from anyone whose got me friended on this piece, as it is my primary literary endeavor for now and the rest of this year.  Please be as thorough as you are willing; I'm aware that you all have busy, productive, satisfying lives to attend to.

Things that you should probably know:

Grey is a name, so I may spell it however I like.

This is the fifth chapter of a novel in progress. I've written much more, but this is the part of it I would like you to consider, so there will be no satisfying conclusion.  Earlier chapters can be found here:

The First
The Second
The Third
The Fourth

I shamelessly copied and pasted this introduction from the first chapter.

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Chapter Four

Mar. 31st, 2007 | 12:40 pm

I would love to have feedback from anyone whose got me friended on this piece, as it is my primary literary endeavor for now and the rest of this year.  Please be as thorough as you are willing; I'm aware that you all have busy, productive, satisfying lives to attend to.

Things that you should probably know:

Grey is a name, so I may spell it however I like.

This is the fourth chapter of a novel in progress. I've written much more, but this is the part of it I would like you to consider, so there will be no satisfying conclusion.  Earlier chapters can be found here:

The First
The Second
The Third

I shamelessly copied and pasted this introduction from the first chapter.

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Chapter Three

Mar. 25th, 2007 | 11:45 pm

I would love to have feedback from anyone whose got me friended on this piece, as it is my primary literary endeavor for now and the rest of this year.  Please be as thorough as you are willing; I'm aware that you all have busy, productive, satisfying lives to attend to.

Things that you should probably know:

Grey is a name, so I may spell it however I like.

This is the third chapter of a novel in progress. I've written much more, but this is the part of it I would like you to consider, so there will be no satisfying conclusion.  Earlier chapters can be found here:

The First
The Second

I shamelessly copied and pasted this introduction from the first chapter.

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Chapter Two

Mar. 13th, 2007 | 01:50 am

I would love to have feedback from anyone whose got me friended on this piece, as it is my primary literary endeavor for now and the rest of this year.  Please be as thorough as you are willing; I'm aware that you all have busy, productive, satisfying lives to attend to.

Things that you should probably know:

Grey is a name, so I may spell it however I like.

This is the second chapter of a novel in progress. I've written much more, but this is the part of it I would like you to consider, so there will be no satisfying conclusion. The first chapter can be found here:

The First

I shamelessly copied and pasted this introduction from the first chapter.


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Chapter One

Mar. 13th, 2007 | 01:48 am

I would love to have feedback from anyone whose got me friended on this piece, as it is my primary literary endeavor for now and the rest of this year.  Please be as thorough as you are willing; I'm aware that you all have busy, productive, satisfying lives to attend to.

Things that you should probably know:

Grey is a name, so I may spell it however I like.

This is the first chapter of a novel in progress. I've written much more, but this is the part of it I would like you to consider, so there will be no satisfying conclusion.

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